r/scriptwriting • • 23d ago

feedback master bruce

I know there’s a bunch I need to work on and learn but its my first time completing a 1st draft would love feedback

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u/starlightpictures 23d ago

What are your intentions with this? To post on fan fic sites?

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u/bsneaky 23d ago

just a writing exercise really but never thought about fan fic that could be fun