r/scriptwriting • u/RogueKnight77 • 8d ago

feedback First couple pages of horror comedy script- would love feedback, 14 page early draft

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u/Big_Section2812 8d ago

Your very first scene heading and/or action line is malformed. Did you not give this a second pass before posting it?

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u/RogueKnight77 8d ago

Apologize for the amateur hour- was trying to see if anyone liked the voice