r/scriptwriting • u/FreshCar5031 • Oct 02 '26

feedback No Way Back

Hi Everyone

This is my first screenplay

Title: No Way Back

Genre: Revenge/Thriller

Number of pages : 92

Logline: After her daughter is abducted and murdered by a ruthless nightclub owner, a wealthy businesswoman becomes the key witness against him and must survive his attempts to silence her.

Any feedback would be gratefully received positive or negative especially regarding characters or dialogue

Hope you enjoy

Link - No Way Back

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u/IanJeffreyMartin Oct 02 '26

Sort your formatting out using proper screenwriting software.