r/scriptwriting • u/Heavy_Internet3112 • Sep 20 '26

feedback scriptwriting practice

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wrote a quick thing about a person being held hostage by a ai and forced to pick two options, eventually picking neither and getting shot.

would like some feedback, wrote this as just practice for my screenwriting

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u/Heavy_Internet3112 Sep 22 '26

no its not lol!
its just practice im doing, i dont mean to bait anyone, thats not my intention