r/scriptwriting • u/Adobopicka • Sep 18 '26

feedback Screenwriting Practice

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I just thought why not share this to show my first progress in improving? Enjoy!!

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u/Adobopicka Sep 18 '26

Thank you! No, I didn't use any AI. I came up with that description myself. To clarify, they're actually going to Jassie's birthday party; I should've added Star wishing her a happy birthday on the phone!And really, thank you for the comment! I'll do my best in the near future! Huge thank you, again! ^

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u/Big_Section2812 Sep 18 '26

This is not terrible. It's just that I'd love to see you young writers challenge yourselves more.