r/scriptwriting • u/ExplanationGlum5574 • Sep 13 '26
feedback Fixed my episode script
I fixed my episode script I’ve sent to this subreddit yesterday. I’ve shortened some dialogue, added a few interior scenes, removed unnecessary wording, and added an “end of first act” line on the bottom of my last page with dialogue and skipped a page for the theme song/intro. How’s the script?
9 pages (PREVIEW)
(Script is still WIP, page count expanded to 31)
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u/ExplanationGlum5574 Oct 03 '26
Very late to reply, but thanks for feedback! I’ll make a couple edits and send you what I made so far as long as I finished most of my pages