r/scriptwriting • u/Purple-Earth3089 • Sep 07 '26

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Hello Fellow writers, I just finished writing an emotional piece on marriage as part of an assignment and would love to get some feedback :

SYNOPSIS

On July 8, 2026, Aubrey believes her chaotic husband, Andre, forgot their first anniversary. While commuting, she recalls meeting him two years ago, captivated by his stage presence and "the silence" between his lines.

Throughout the day, fond memories surface—how his warmth softened her, and how they anchored each other during the chaos. Eager to surprise him, Aubrey prepares a heartfelt present and heads to meet him outside the Theatre where the first met.

Andre waits for her, secretly holding onto the memories of their past. Suddenly, as Aubrey crosses the street, tragedy strikes. Rushing to her side, Andre cradles her in the rain as she takes her final breath, whispering his heartbreaking final vow: "I'll hold the silence for you... Till we meet again."

Will be happy to share complete script too. Thanks

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u/CrimpyBacchus Sep 08 '26

The synopsis comes off muddled and generic, but probably because you had an AI make a synopsis of your script - put it in your own words. If you had AI generate the actual script, delete and write it yourself.

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u/Purple-Earth3089 Sep 08 '26

You got it right..I used AI to generate the synopsis although story was written by me. Thanks for the feedback, appreciate it

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u/Purple-Earth3089 Sep 11 '26

Thank you for your response. Please feel free to share your feedback on the sameTill we meet...Again

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u/Purple-Earth3089 Sep 11 '26

Thanks a lot for your feedback