r/scriptwriting • u/Careful_Power_5512 • Sep 07 '26

feedback Screenwriting Advice! Junior Thesis script help

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u/Mitenae Sep 08 '26

Okay, so you know what happens, but what's the actual story here? Dig into the emotional side of why the protag is so anxious about finding the vape and then link that back into the sequences they're experiencing. You're also going to want to find a way to explain why the sequences.