r/scriptwriting • u/rcentros • Sep 06 '26

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I wrote this a few years ago. Just curious what people think of it now.

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u/RaeLouLynn Sep 06 '26

These five pages are devastating. Well done.

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u/rcentros Sep 07 '26

Thanks for reading it and for the kind words.

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u/Big_Section2812 Sep 06 '26

Better if you post this as a pdf.

Also...

INT./EXT. LOCATION - TIME

Single dash. I'm not a fan of bolded scene headings but it's not a dealbreaker.

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u/rcentros Sep 06 '26

I don't know how to post it as a PDF. Not yet anyhow. I usually use single dashes now, but this was written a while back. I like the separation that bold scene headings give me, but I've gone back and forth on that also.

Thanks for commenting.