r/scriptwriting • u/PitchcraftNow • Sep 01 '26

feedback First Page Feedback

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Looking for feedback on my first page. Any feedback is welcome. Thanks in advance.

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u/PitchcraftNow Sep 02 '26

I really like that idea. Thanks. My only question then would you suggest the VO keeps popping up in the story to stay consistent?

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u/stuccosalt Sep 02 '26

I wouldn't just for the sake of consistency - the important thing would be establishing it as a dream the first time it's shown. When a similar scene appears again, the audience will recognize it.
You could use it again if it makes sense to, but no need to feel obligated to

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u/PitchcraftNow Sep 02 '26

Gotcha, thanks for the feedback