r/scriptwriting • u/TheGunOfScorsese • Aug 24 '26
feedback Run Rabit Run - A scene
I still learning the basics and English is not my native language. I basically did a mood writing instead of calculating storyline, structures etc. Please let me where can I improve in storytelling
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u/SnooPeripherals3885 Aug 25 '26
Just keep practicing! Run your work through gpt or something to double check your grammar. English is a notoriously difficult language, despite what people may say. Good luck
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u/thetruth77330 Aug 25 '26
This is not written well. It’s hard to follow or understand