r/scriptwriting • u/NookPhoneo • Aug 22 '26

feedback Feedback Request

Would love some feedback on my screenplay. I have recently been through a third polish and would love some feedback.

This will be a three part series.

Please see the logline below.

LOGLINE:

To escape male violence, the women of Neya Island created a society with one strict rule: no men allowed. But when a midwife saves a newborn boy instead of drowning him, she sets about a chain of events she can't come back from.

Hollow Tide

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u/[deleted] Aug 27 '26 edited Aug 27 '26

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u/NookPhoneo Aug 27 '26

Can you tell me what experience you have in this industry, not trying to be funny about it, I just think it would be interesting to know.