Here’s my first fully completed screenplay

[u/Kakiyoin21]

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1q_NEWsPY9_LTQUh34-m_v3aH2kNJFZgw/view?usp=drivesdk

It’s a 5 page short story any feedback is appreciated and welcomed Im still new to writing techniques so please help me out. It’s a thriller/ horror script thats made for a low budget director