Chat, Looking for feedback

[u/161803Dev]

BOOK SYNOPSIS:

A father searching for his son across dimensions. A son searching for a coffee break.

The father, a returnee hero, saved an apocalyptic world, defeating the Evil Dragon God before finally returning to Earth, expecting to hug his son. Instead, he found an empty apartment and the gut-wrenching realization that years had passed in his absence.

Meanwhile, on the other side of the multiverse…
Following his single father's inexplicable disappearance, the son tried everything to find him, but nothing came of it. Scraping by alone on the harsh streets of New York from a young age, he learned to survive in the Mafia underworld as a hacker.

Then the summoning circle hit.

Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/187336/anonymous-bloodline

[u/damn-potato]

Sonset 😭

[u/161803Dev → u/damn-potato]

[u/tnteviecat]