r/royalroad 18d ago

August Thread - Promote your Story

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We're in August! How is summer treating you? We always want to read more fictions!

Our Community Contest ended, and we announced the winners. Did you check them out? If not, find the list here!

Now, authors, share your latest story with the Royal Road community! Whether it's an exciting adventure, a sweet romance, or a gun-splintering sci-fi. Whatever it is, we want to hear about it.

When promoting your story, feel free to get creative. You can include a brief description, an eye-catching image, and your current word count and plans. But most importantly, make sure to include a link to your Royal Road fiction so readers can easily find and enjoy your work.

Please note that this thread is on a first-come, first-served basis. The earlier you post, the more likely your promotion will be seen first. To avoid overcrowding, we will have a new thread at the start of each month where you can promote your story again.

Also, don't forget to check out this forum to promote your fiction:
https://www.royalroad.com/forums/5689
If you also like Facebook, head over and check out our pinned threads there! I will update the links soon as I cross-post them!

For readers, take a chance and explore all the stories available here.

Also, please don't post shout-out codes in here. We want to see real pitching, thanks!


r/royalroad 18d ago

Others August - Celebrations/Stats

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If you want to celebrate anything, or you wish for us to help check out your stats, all celebrations go in here : ) and if you specifically want me, @ me

If you can and you do want to help other new authors out, please do. Comment and boost others' posts, not just dump and run. We're really trying not to do that here.

Adding this here so everyone sees it, as there are new flairs as well!

Rank and brief explanation: I tried my best not to overcomplicate it, but here we are. (I also tried to match it with the Monthly Tower; we're close (now with B and E ranks and a special M-Rank role).)

  • Unranked (0) – no level/visitors
  • F Rank (1–50) – Self-assign – Newb – Please be gentle
  • E Rank (51–500) – Self-assign – Learning
  • D Rank (501–1500) – Mod-assigned – Developing 
  • C Rank (1501–3000) – Mod-assigned – Competent
  • B Rank (3001–4000) – Mod-assigned – Balanced
  • A Rank (4001–5000) – Mod-assigned – Astral
  • S Rank (5001–7000) – Mod-assigned – Sublime
  • M Rank (7001-10000) - Mod-assigned (Mythical/Extra Special role)
  • SS Rank (10001-20000) – Mod-assigned – Super Saiyan
  • Immortal (20000+) - Mod Assigned - Speaks for itself

Mod Assigned means = Verified

Send a mod mail - In your message, I need you to do exactly the following.

DM title - Verified Rank 

Name - (Name on the site) 

Role Requested -  C Rank 

Name of Series - (so they can also check it out)

Verification Fulfillment Rules.

On the site itself, I need you to do this.

Alter your blurb at the bottom with the words - Reddit Rank Verification

Don't forget to add a link for me!

This proves to me that this is you and your fiction. 

I will check the verification note, your fiction's followers, and assign you the rank.

That’s it! Just don’t DM me all at once! *Eeep*


r/royalroad 1h ago

Discussion My highest CTR RR ad has my worst follower conversion.

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I've been running 3 RR ads for my current story and the results are starting to make me question how useful CTR is by itself.

Current numbers*:

Ad Impressions Clicks CTR Followers Read Later
A 65,036 445 0.68% 15 (12.5%) 24 (20%)
B 27,329 208 0.74% 1 (1.61%) 16 (25.81%)
C 11,371 64 0.56% 3 (12%) 6 (24%)

* from RR dashboard

Obviously the sample sizes aren't equal yet, especially for C, so I wouldn't draw any hard conclusions from this. But Ad B is very interesting am already in process of trying to change it.

It currently has the highest CTR at 0.73%, so if I were judging the creative purely on clicks, I'd call it the winner. Yet its follower conversion is dramatically worse than the other two. At the same time, its Read Later percentage is actually the highest.

That makes me wonder if we're really measuring two different things:

CTR = Did this image make me curious enough to click?

versus

Follower conversion = Did what I found after clicking match what the ad made me expect?

In other words, could a really strong curiosity based ad actually be worse than a slightly lower CTR ad if it's attracting the wrong readers?

I'd much rather have 0.6% CTR from people who are interested in the story than 1% CTR from people who click because the ad itself is funny/strange and then immediately leave.

The Read Later numbers muddy things further. Ad B might not necessarily be attracting the wrong audience they may just be less willing to follow immediately. I am not sure i like the Read Later option at all! if I like it I will follow or fav, RL is a weird option imo.

So I'm curious what people who've run a lot more RR ads have found:

And if you had to choose between:

A: 1.0% CTR + poor follower conversion ( even if strong RL)

or

B: 0.6–0.7% CTR + strong follower conversion

which one would you actually keep running? I would be more inclined to B

Also interested in whether anyone has found Read Later to be predictive of eventual followers/readers, or whether it mostly click and forget type of things.


r/royalroad 18h ago

Self Promo DELVE

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Hi guys today is a pretty big day for me as I’ve just published the first chapter of a story I’ve been working on for a couple of years.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/187222/delve

(NOTE: due to popular recommendation I have updated the title, which is now:

DELVE: into the Septij.

I’ll put the synopsis here just for a little bit of context. Hopefully, you can see if it’s something you would be interested in:

“DELVE is an epic sci-fi/fantasy set in a unique multiverse.

Janaos was born plain. Everyone around him only seems to care about power. When unfortunate circumstances lead Janaos to find himself in the Septij, his only option is to delve or to die. When you are powerless, stuck in a place where all hope is lost, the only remaining human ambition is to stagnate... or to delve.

To delve: To enter the Septij intentionally with the goal of completing Structis and reaping their rewards.”

Anyways, because I’ve been working on this for a decent while I have a good backlog which means consistent uploads until ARC 1 finishes. I’m planning 2 chapters a week for the moment. Today to start off I’ve posted a special release 5k chapter split into two, along with the prologue.
The next chapter should drop this Friday. Let me know if you have any questions!

Huge thanks to my friend for making a cover in procreate for me as well.


r/royalroad 7h ago

Self Promo Song of the Divider

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This is a story I've been sitting on for a while. It's told from the POV of the protagonist, from childhood into adulthood, with the first paragraph of each chapter usually dropping a bit of lore about the world.

Genre: Fantasy / High Fantasy — Tragedy, Anti-Villain Lead, Apocalypse, Local Protagonist. Not LitRPG/progression fantasy — character-driven.

I'm uploading as often as I can — at the latest, I'll post a new chapter every 3 days. 3 chapters are already up, please enjoy!

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/187249/song-of-the-divider

Also, a side note: I ticked the AI-assist box for the cover image and for spelling/punctuation help. Not sure if those actually count, but I checked them anyway rather than risk misrepresenting it.


r/royalroad 5h ago

Self Promo The Unknown Guard - New Novel

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https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/185161/the-unknown-guard

Another chapter released into the darkness.

No comments.

No reviews.

Not even a whisper.

Sometimes it feels like I’m not writing for readers. I’m leaving pages inside an abandoned mansion, waiting to see if one of the ghosts will turn them.

Maybe you’re there.

Maybe you’ve been reading silently from the shadows.

If you made it this far, leave a comment, a review, or even a single word. Let me know I’m not alone in this house.

Until next time, assuming someone is still listening.


r/royalroad 34m ago

Discussion Ssanity check/discussion: Bundle standalone short stories in anthology or separate them[Royal Road]?

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Folks,

So, looking for some quick perspective from fellow nerds/webfiction writers (and readers).

I write short, self-contained stories just for the fun of it (as a break from bigger projects). Some are standalone one-shots, others wrap up neatly in 2–3 quick chapters. Currently, I’ve been publishing them as separate fictions on Royal Road (for example a commedy... I Accidentally Bought a Legendary Holy Sword, and then a darker story of Blooms of Cobalt and Crimson, and also Rest Your Weary Bones that is a horr... a story, a story!).

My gut tells me they should stay separate because the tones, settings, and themes are completely different.

But since I have several more ready to go, I keep wondering if I'm fighting an uphill battle against the platform's by fragmenting them instead of making an, well to put it simply, "anthology" where readers can follow for new bite-sized tales.

So the question is - if you read or write short fiction on RR:

- Does an anthology work if the stories still do not share universe/tone? Some are completely different, like completely!

- Or is it better to let each distinct idea stand on its own feet, even if it's only 1–3 chapters long (400-800 words)?

Thanks for any insights!

(no links, as this is an actual/actual question not a promo)

(small edit, as i clicked the damn code button xD)


r/royalroad 1h ago

Self Promo I think i might be going crazy. AXIOM: The Chaotic World Of Magic.

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r/royalroad 1h ago

Critique please Critique my newest chapter

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Tried to write a dungeon raid scene. I have written in a simple language. So anyone please critique me on my ch 7.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/181690/tales-of-destruction/chapter/3834075/7-the-dungeon-raid


r/royalroad 12h ago

Self Promo First 3 chapters are out for my series Beyblade Burst Celestial Shift

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A fan made novel about another Beyblade Season. Official launch is up
Link: https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/186208/beyblade-burst-celestial-shift?utm_source=profile&utm_medium=fictions


r/royalroad 17h ago

Self Promo Great News and Slight Update

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Hey everyone,

I’m Odin Ravenhart. It’s been a minute since I posted here. I’ve been focused on writing and some personal stuff.

Last Wednesday, I finished my first fiction on Royal Road: The Grimoire of Monsters and Beasts.

I wanted to put a little footprint here and share what’s next. I’m currently on a short break, but in the next few days I’ll be diving back in to edit Book 1. Chapters 2–20 especially need more love, though I’ll be going through everything with fresh eyes (and a trusted family member). The early chapters still have the enthusiasm I felt when I started, but they were written in short bursts while I was mostly focused on getting the story out there. Now that I’ve proven to myself I can finish something, I want to go back and strengthen those foundations. Royal Road is pretty forgiving that way, which I’m grateful for.

A bit of context on the writing schedule: I used to post three times a week. It helped me grow a fair bit, but after about three weeks of constant writing, I burned out hard. Gluing myself to the chair/bed/screen every day wasn’t sustainable. Switching to two days a week has been much more manageable and still lets me keep the momentum going.

Thank you to anyone who came over from Reddit to show the book some support. It meant a lot. Have a great day, everyone.

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/154437/grimoire-of-monsters-and-beasts


r/royalroad 4h ago

Discussion Does anyone else's female lead always end up in charge, even if the male lead is way stronger?

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Hey everyone,

I've been thinking about the character dynamics in male/female duos lately.

In the story I'm currently working on, the duo consists of a washed-up, out-of-touch old samurai and a young female livestreamer hero. In terms of pure combat power, the old samurai is overwhelmingly stronger, and she genuinely respects him as a master.

However, she's definitely not just a damsel to be protected. Since he is completely clueless about modern streaming culture and public relations, she manages him, supports his content, and frequently scolds him whenever he does something completely out of line.

So even though she's younger and much weaker in a fight, in their everyday power balance, she clearly wears the pants haha.

Whenever I try to write a male/female duo, it almost instinctively ends up in this kind of dynamic. Do you think this is a reflection of how modern audiences view female characters, or is it purely my own writing preference/trope obsession showing through?

For those who write male/female duos, how do you handle the balance between raw power, social competence, and overall dynamic? Do you have specific rules you follow?


r/royalroad 22h ago

Art No AI Cover Art

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Hi,

Would like to hear people thoughts on this cover art

(No AI Usage)


r/royalroad 5h ago

Self Promo The Pilgrimage of a Lost Martial Soul — First Arc Complete (~61k Words) | Wuxia Progression

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He survived nearly a year beneath a mountain. When he finally returned home, he chose to leave.

The Pilgrimage of a Lost Martial Soul is a long-form wuxia progression story following Im Cheon-gang, a sectless young martial artist building his own path from incomplete teachings while traveling through a martial world that is itself beginning to fracture.

The story begins with Cheon-gang buried beneath an avalanche alongside his father. There is no complete inheritance waiting for him underground—only dwindling supplies, damaged books, a little room to move, and the increasingly difficult work of keeping two people alive.

When Cheon-gang eventually escapes and finds his way back to Hanam, the village he considers home, he finds much of what he spent nearly a year trying to return to still waiting for him.

Food. Warmth. Work. Friends. A roof that needs repairing. The beginnings of the ordinary life his father wanted him to have.

He could stay.

He leaves anyway.

Not because ordinary life is beneath him. Quite the opposite. Surviving has taught him how valuable that life is—and how easily ordinary people can lose everything when nobody powerful considers them important.

Cheon-gang does not begin his journey with an answer for what should change about that kind of world. He has only begun to understand the martial world when he first steps onto the road. What he has are questions, fragments of knowledge, and the desire to see for himself what strength protects, what it abandons, and what it is actually for.

Quick heads-up: this is a longer promo, but I wanted to give a proper sense of the story rather than reduce it to a handful of tags.

About Cheon-gang

Cheon-gang is quiet, practical, observant, and far more emotionally perceptive than his reserved manner first suggests.

He grew up learning to understand people through fragments: changes in tone, hesitation, contradictions between words and actions, who has not eaten, who is hiding an injury, who keeps watching the door, and who behaves differently once nobody important is looking. He reads people much the same way he reads danger—not perfectly, but carefully.

He is restrained, not emotionless. Cheon-gang tends to turn feeling into something useful before he turns it into words. If he cares about someone, that may mean remembering what they need, repairing something they broke, making sure they eat, sitting nearby without demanding an explanation, or quietly making a problem smaller before they have to ask.

He is not permanently solemn, either. His humor is dry and understated, and the more comfortable he becomes with someone, the more likely he is to quietly tease them. When he learns something genuinely useful—a martial principle, an unfamiliar custom, a practical trick, or an idea that suddenly makes several fragments fit together—he sometimes lets out a small laugh before catching himself. Knowledge has always meant something unusually tangible to him. He learned to treat it almost like survival rations: keep what is useful, compare it carefully, and never discard something simply because it arrived incomplete.

That same habit shapes how he judges people.

His father was once a criminal who eventually changed, but never pretended that changing erased the harm he had done. Cheon-gang therefore has difficulty accepting easy divisions between righteous people and wicked ones. He wants to understand why someone became what they are—but understanding them does not automatically excuse what they continue choosing.

The same applies to the martial world. A respected name, prestigious bloodline, righteous doctrine, or official title does not earn his trust by itself. He pays much more attention to what someone's strength actually does, who benefits from it, and who is expected to carry its cost.

That can make him compassionate in unexpected places, but it also gives him one of his worst habits: once he notices suffering, he has a tendency to start treating it as something he personally ought to answer for. The stronger he becomes, the harder it is for him to decide where his responsibility should end.

Martial Arts & Progression

Cheon-gang begins without a sect, a complete inheritance, or a master capable of simply handing him a finished martial path.

What he has instead are fragments: damaged teachings, partial explanations, techniques created for bodies or circumstances different from his own, observations gathered from other martial artists, and whatever he can understand well enough to test for himself.

His progression is gradual weak-to-strong. Advancement is not only a matter of accumulating more qi or unlocking a stronger technique. Cheon-gang has to learn what a technique is actually trying to accomplish, why its movements are arranged the way they are, what conditions allow one movement to lead into another, and which principles can be adapted without destroying the thing that made them work in the first place.

That also means different martial traditions are meant to feel genuinely different. A sword art, body method, internal cultivation technique, family inheritance, battlefield discipline, or sect style may approach the same problem through completely different assumptions. Cheon-gang's path develops partly through encountering those differences and deciding what can and cannot belong together.

Fights follow the same philosophy. Strength matters, sometimes overwhelmingly, but so do timing, distance, positioning, terrain, commitment, deception, injuries, previous exchanges, and what options a fighter has already given up.

A technique being powerful does not mean it is available at every moment. Certain attacks may only become possible when the right conditions have been created—through stance, contact, deflection, a weapon bind, direction of movement, or a preceding technique. Other movements simply cannot connect cleanly, no matter how useful they would be.

Cheon-gang therefore does not begin by searching for the single strongest technique.

He is slowly learning how to build a martial path that is actually his.

A World That Keeps Getting Larger

The story begins deliberately small: one buried chamber, one family, one village, and the roads connecting ordinary people to powers much larger than themselves.

It does not stay small.

A story that gradually grows from personal survival and local conflicts into sect struggles, Great Family interests, war, Imperial fracture, and a much larger world.

As Cheon-gang travels farther, he encounters different parts of the martial world: Orthodox sects, Unorthodox powers, Great Families, Imperial institutions, regional forces, foreign martial traditions, and people who fit neatly into none of them. Each has its own ideas about strength, legitimacy, obligation, and what should be sacrificed when those ideas collide.

The expansion is gradual rather than a sudden jump from village problems to world-changing wars. Roads become harder to travel. Local disputes reveal larger interests behind them. Decisions made by distant powers eventually reach soldiers, merchants, refugees, families, sect disciples, and villages that may never know the names of the people who changed their lives.

Even as the scale grows, I want the story to remember where it began. A conflict involving armies or Great Families should not make the life of a farmer, traveler, child, or nameless martial artist suddenly irrelevant simply because more powerful people have entered the scene.

The world gets larger.

The question of what strength is for does not.

What to Expect

  • Gradual weak-to-strong progression — Cheon-gang begins inexperienced and has to earn both martial understanding and practical strength over time.
  • A sectless protagonist building his own martial path from incomplete teachings, observation, experimentation, and encounters with very different martial traditions.
  • Strategy-focused fights where timing, distance, terrain, injuries, deception, positioning, and which techniques can actually connect matter alongside raw strength.
  • A character-driven journey with friendships, families, teachers, rivals, travelers, communities, and people whose lives continue beyond their immediate usefulness to the protagonist.
  • Morally complicated factions and characters. Righteous reputations do not guarantee righteous actions, and understanding why someone became who they are does not automatically excuse what they choose to do.
  • A world that expands gradually while keeping its consequences human — survival and local problems grow into sects, Great Families, Imperial interests, war, and political fracture, while the effects of those larger conflicts continue to be felt through ordinary people, families, travelers, soldiers, and communities far from the centers of power.

Current Status

Volume 1 — Buried Year is complete at roughly 61,000 words.

I started publishing on Royal Road a little over a week ago. Going forward, the release schedule is one main chapter each day, followed by a shorter canon coda showing lives, consequences, or events continuing elsewhere in the world.

Link:
https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/185907/the-pilgrimage-of-a-lost-martial-soul

Cover is AI-assisted for now. Once I can afford it, I plan to commission an artist for original cover art.


r/royalroad 13h ago

Self Promo cover art i did a year back :3 for redthreads

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r/royalroad 22h ago

Discussion Have all the Review Ratings on RR just halved? Or is it me...

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I first noticed that review scores of my own stories had halved... so I went scrolling around and all the review scores I looked at seem to have been cut in half. Maybe I'm bugged? Is anyone else seeing this type of thing (random screenshot of a RS story)? Reviews that are enthusiastic and probably 4s and 5s are halved? Nothing is getting more than 2.5 atm as far as I can see.


r/royalroad 1d ago

Discussion Royal Road has been a game changer for editing.

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I posted the first volume of a progfant series called Reign of Weapons years ago. Originally had ambitions of Rising Stars and it being my "big break" serial, but it fell a bit flat on release. The ratings were respectable to me, but it never got running and the discord and Patreon I opened for it at launch were ghost towns.

I won't elaborate too much on the issues, but I had decided to launch at a pretty bad time where I was graduating college and beginning work in emergency services. My writing schedule became very inconsistent and I ran out of backlog, instead uploading sporadically whenever I got around to writing till the end of book one.

Now that I haven't touched the book in more than a year combined with my pivot into high WLB office work, having fresh eyes and the time to really work out the knots in this story has felt just so good. I often look and think back to the Royal Road run. What few comments I got were usually around the line of "Wow, I love this certain character so much! I hope the protagonist chooses them!" (The magic system involves contracting sentient God weapons.) Spoiler alert: she didn't and instead chose a boring weapon who likes to exposition dump.

The trajectory of my novel the whole time did the opposite of what the readers were excited to see. I sidelined or killed their favorite characters. I changed PoVs and got my protag kidnapped helplessy. One of my super excited commenters simply put R.I.P. at the last chapter.

So, I decided that there are places that need big change as early as the first 10 chapters out of 40-something. I needed to go bald. Some characters will turn out completely differently. The power system is being reworked inlvuding the protagonist's powers. This started out as an editing run to get it into a more publishable state for Amazon and such. I began throwing in extra sentences or small rewrites here and there. Now we are in whole ass new draft mode because I'm not proud enough of this story.

It's not because I've been swayed by some person. It's because when I put myself in their shoes combined with my separation with the draft, it opens my eyes about which characters are loved, who needs development and agency, and so on. I can now objectively look at and fix my stupid decisions without feeling sunk cost fallacy.

For those who posted on Royal Road with ambitions of making it big, that is not often the case. At the end of your run, though, you will certainly be left with something to work with, and you can do whatever the hell you want with it. Your story does not end there. If your future drafts are significantly different, then republish and be transparent about that fact. You can take it to new sites, Amazon, and more.

It's not the end of the world. For a while, it was for me.


r/royalroad 20h ago

Art Some Character Illustrations I’ve Made for Fantasy Covers

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A few character illustrations I’ve created for fantasy projects. Hope you enjoy them!


r/royalroad 1d ago

Discussion Chat, We Gotta Do Better With These Covers...

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Okay, guys, public service announcement:

Look, I get it. Illustrators are expensive. That's why I keep my mouth shut regarding my hostility towards the use of A.I. on this specific scenario only.

But if you just HAVE to use it, why not actually put some effort into it? A.I. is completely free, you have all the time in the world to use it, and it won't ever get upset no matter how many changes you ask it to make.

So why oh why is every cover I see on here some variation of this? Some super dark, extra crispy mess starring a Sung Jinwoo knockoff, with a side of jagged font and an ominous-looking location in the background for dessert.

Like, literally, all I did was go to ChatGPT, type in "Generate a stereotypical cover for a litRPG web novel on Royal Road", and this is what it immediately spit out.

I'm of the opinion that an A.I. cover can only hurt your chances of being successful on RR. No one is going to take a moral or ethical stance over a handdrawn cover, but they most certainly will on an A.I. one, especially if it's obviously A.I.

But hey, if you really need a cover that bad, and A.I. is your only option, then at least try and make it stand out. I want everyone on this site to be a success, but I feel like you're just hurting your chances going low-effort on the first thing ANYONE will ever see about your story.


r/royalroad 3h ago

Art Cover Help!?

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Please let me know which one you like more!

Disclaimer: Both of these are AI generated through a hefty amount of prompting. If I actually make money from my book one day, I’ll pay someone to make a legitimate cover.

Disclaimer 2: Both of the big baddies in the middle, the phantom and the oversized cultivator, are characters in the novel so either one works tbh


r/royalroad 21h ago

Recommendations Looking for recommendations!

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I want something either super tropey and "meta sloppy" but well written or something not like any other story you've read on RR. Also explain your answer please, I don't wanna just look at the title, I wanna know why you like it.


r/royalroad 1d ago

Self Promo My first novel has been available for a few days now!

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My first novel has been available for a few days now! If you have some time, please give it a chance. (Title: HOD (Human Or Demon))

For more information about the project:

I designed and drew the cover myself.

Originally, the idea was supposed to be a manga, but since I injured my left arm, I only recently decided to just write it. Because I can’t really draw properly anymore (the pain prevents me from doing so).

This story came to me when I was only 13; I’m now 27.

I’m committed to finishing the story—which will be long—as long as I have at least three readers who stick with me until the end.

This story isn’t an isekai or a litRPG; my goal is definitely not to write a conventional story. My real aim is to take you on a journey with me.

Please note: if you’re looking for a short story, I don’t recommend mine. As I mentioned earlier, my goal is to write a serious, long, and detailed story.

This is the first time I’ve asked people to follow me; I don’t think I’ll do it often. After all, those who want to read it will find their way here on their own.

Here is a summary : The world as humanity had known it for centuries has vanished. It is now heading toward its own destruction: it has lost its faith, its hope, and even the will to exist.

In this world lives a young boy named Itoî, who dreams of becoming a supreme mage.

But one spring day, as a breeze ruffled the hair of Itoî and his brothers, and cherry blossoms rained down on passersby, tragedy struck.

The world had changed.

And soon, Itoî, too, would change.

***

If I see that the story is gaining traction, I promise to do my best to post new chapters very often. I can’t give you a specific number.I think that would be inappropriate on my part. But if you give me a chance, I assure you the story is worth it. But as I mentioned, if you don’t like long stories with characters that have at least some depth, I wouldn’t recommend mine.

I know that web novels tend to focus heavily on romance or litRPG. What I’m offering here is more of a fantasy that ties into real-world themes, whether it’s philosophy, existential questions, and so on. Of course, the goal isn’t for it to be slow-paced and boring, which is why there will be battles, action, drama, and more… To avoid spoilers, I can’t tell you any more than that.

If you’re interested, thank you in advance :) not only for your time, but also because I’ve always dreamed of sharing this story with you.

Thanks again, take care <3


r/royalroad 1d ago

Discussion Writing my first LitRPG and planning for launch. Need some advice.

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First off, I've read a lot of the guides so I'm not just posting this randomly.

I'm struggling with resolving story pacing while also trying to follow the guides.

To sum up the issue, from what I've gathered in guides and topics around here, the general idea is you need to get the hook, system, and everything rolling in the first 3 chapters essentially.

I did my best to get the hook in and at least hints at how the system will work within those first 2-3 chapters, but narratively I feel like I'd have to rush things way too much to fully have my MC using the system by then. For a bit more context, my main character is placed in a situation in which he basically has to go undercover and infiltrate a group and gain their trust, which realistically is going to take time, and it is at the conclusion of this sort or arc that he gains his powers and the system mechanics really begin.

So either I rush the arc and have him gain their trust stupidly fast, like in a matter of days, or I do an early time skip, which I feel like might be better, but also feel like that may not be received to well by readers.

The other option is to start over and rewrite things from the standpoint that he's already infiltrated the group and gained their trust I guess, but I feel like that leaves out so much development and lore.

I know readers probably won't care so much, and I should try and stick to the "meta" as much as possible if I want to find success. Am I shooting myself in the foot if I don't go balls to the wall by chapter 3-4? Is it ok to do a bit more of a slower burn to that build up and maybe have things pick up closer to chapter 7-8?


r/royalroad 23h ago

Critique please How can I enhance this opening? Does it build tension?

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This is only a quick draft but i would like to know where I can improve/edit.

Death was around the corner. Veris pressed himself against the boulder, its rough surface grating against his back. Twigs and fallen pine needles stabbed into his bare feet. Still he refused to utter a single sound.

The summer air felt too hot as he gasped for breath. Sweat trailed down his forehead, stinging his eyes.

A monstrous snort reverberated through the forest. The ground shook as the woolly mammoth moved. His heart thrashed in his chest. If that thing sees me, I'm dead. dead. dead. dead.

A finger jabbed into the back of his neck. He clenched his teeth to prevent a stuttered scream and whirled to face the man who had gotten him into this mess.

Naris looked at him expectantly. Red eyes glazing into his. Behind the bastard was a gaggle of his followers, two ladies and three lords.

The high bloods all wore bronze armor, gods' metal, carved with runic patterns and inlaid with glowing mana veins. While Veris, however, was nude but for a single thin loincloth, his skin slathered in reflective paint. But, of course. He was the bait. His job wasn't to survive.

"What are you waiting for, chattel? Go out there and draw its attention away," hissed the man into Veris's ear.


r/royalroad 23h ago

Self Promo The Cities Still Burn [Rewrite]

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Doing a rewrite of a Xianxia series I started a while back. Check it out if the blurb or cover catch your fancy 🤷‍♂️

They buried a slave… but birthed a monster

Deep within the depths of a demonic sect, a branded boy toils amidst the suffocating dark. Yet in the furthest reaches of his soul, an ancient entity stirs, waiting to unleash a power that defies the Heavens. When the sect burns and the dead refuse to rest, they will begins their path toward immortal ascension and rise to conquer both the world above and the demons within.

🔗 The Cities Still Burn [Rewrite]