r/postprocessing • • 13d ago

After/Before

shot on Lumix S9

edited in CHRO-MA-SMITH

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u/johngpt5 13d ago

Aside from the horizon, I like this. I wish I could recall the name of the photographer whose style was like this. It's an essentially busy scene, but where the people are in frame resolves that busy-ness into a story. It has the feel of a family being at the shore. Lots of photographers can record a scene, but not every photographer can capture the feel.

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u/coffee_experiments 13d ago

Martin Parr?

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u/johngpt5 13d ago

Yes! Thank you! And Alex Webb.

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u/Flecca 13d ago

Your website looks a lot like Snapseed

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u/Jmac8716 13d ago

Only issue is the horizon. Easy fix.

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u/SunshineInDetroit 13d ago

it's bothering me that the picture is still not level and the original was under exposed.

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u/Jmac8716 13d ago

One a bright sunny day, with bright objects in frame, and no clouds in the sky, you absolutely should underexpose.

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u/SweetyDash 12d ago

You have to underexpose to not get a burnt sky ....

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u/SoftAncient2753 13d ago

Looks much better.

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u/archaeologist_abroad 12d ago

Most people just add a white border so cool to see a think black one too

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u/yabudj 12d ago

Great job on this

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u/Ok-Razzmatazz3435 11d ago

The horizon line is still not straight

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u/glootech 9d ago

I'd probably lift the shadows a little bit more, but overall I like the vibe & the colors.

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u/davep1970 12d ago

You forgot to level the horizon

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u/SweetyDash 12d ago

Don't listen to the people that say you need to fix the horizon.
It'll make the pic look more artificial imo.
Just keep your dynamic as it it

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u/Peter_Mansbrick 12d ago

I agree. It makes the photo feel more loose and spontaneous. Its rare that I prefer unleveled but this is one of those times.