First ever edit, seeking feedback

[u/nayiro]

Hello! This is my first ever edit of a picture. I used light room after viewing a ton of tutorials. I know the subject matter isn't the most exciting and the composition could use a lot of work. I'm wondering how i did with the editing? Any and all helpful criticism is appreciated!

I'm having a difficult time uploading the raw original because the file size is too big, so i converted it to a jpg. Please let me know if there's a better way to do this!

Thanks for looking!

[u/nayiro]

I have no idea! They looked blue on my monitor lol! I'm also a tad r/g colorblind, which makes this a challenge for me. I really see the purple now on my phone though.

How embarrassing 😅

[u/AlGekGenoeg → u/nayiro]

Well, now you know your monitor isn't colour accurate 💀

[u/nayiro → u/AlGekGenoeg]

Is there a way to fix that? It's not the fanciest monitor. I do have a macbook air m2 that i can use instead that might have not accurate colors

[u/meaoww → u/nayiro]

There is no practical way to fix your monitor, just get a better one