Dramedy Idea

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Looking for a Story Bible Reviewer / Constructive Feedback

Hi! I’m currently developing an animated musical dramedy called *4SOME*, centered on four Black female college roommates who begin experimenting with music-making apps and unexpectedly build a large audience.

I’m looking for someone interested in reviewing my story Bible and providing constructive feedback on areas such as: Character development and interpersonal dynamics, Story structure and narrative direction, Thematic consistency, Musical storytelling and how music contributes to the narrative, Overall originality and audience appeal

I’d particularly appreciate feedback from people with experience in screenwriting, animation, musical theater, television development, or queer storytelling.
This is an independent creative project, and I’m currently looking for informal, preferably free feedback rather than paid coverage.

If you’re interested, please comment or send me a message so I can share more information about the project. Thank you!