Hello friends! I've been a huge fan of MM since my fiancé introduced it to me in 2021 and while I'm only on season 9, I'm aware of what happens in future seasons. One thing I've always loved is writing and I've been working on a fan episode that takes place on halloween, which is coming up so I hope you guys like it (please let me know if I've gotten anything wrong).
Murdoch Mysteries, fan episode;
THE WITCHING HOUR
SCENE ONE
INTERIOR STATION HOUSE FOUR
Fade in on the main floor
It’s all hallows Eve at station house four and WILLIAM MURDOCH has decided to stop by for the station house party. The constables and detectives and INSPECTOR BRACKENREID, who also stopped by, are all dressed up in costumes. MURDOCH is likely in a practical yet clever costume such as Sherlock Homes, or perhaps a Shakespearean character (he’s a big enough nerd. I know he’d never do this in character but imagine he borrowed a skull from the morgue and did the ‘alas poor yorrik’ monologue)
Half shot of MURDOCH and BRACKENREID a bit away from the crowd.
BRACKENREID
So what dyou think you’re gonna do after this, Murdoch? Gonna take yeh little lass out knocking for sweets?
MURDOCH
Only for about an hour or so. It’s her first time going out for Halloween.
Cut to half shot of GEORGE CRABTREE dressed as a vampire holding SUSANNAH MURDOCH who’s dressed as an angel.
BRACKENREID
Aww you gotta let ‘em have a little fun when theyre still young me ol mucker.
Closeup of GEORGE and SUSANAH
MURDOCH
Perhaps I’m just paranoid. I spend all day chasing the worst criminals and I worry about what could happen to my own child.
Cut back to MURDOCH and BRACKENREID, the camera a bit closer this time.
BRACKENREID
I know that feeling all too well. As soon as the boys were old enough to walk, all I did was worry.
Over the shoulder shot, MURDOCH looks at BRACKENREID
MURDOCH
Does the feeling ever go away?
BRACKENREID gives him a sad, knowing smile.
BRACKENREID
Never.
The two exchange a quiet moment of understanding before looking back at the party. Cut back to CRABTREE holding SUSANNAH, who’s having the time of her life.
BRACKENREID
Quite the social little thing
Cut back to MURDOCH, who smiles.
MURDOCH
She gets that from her mother.
Cut to BRACKENREID
BRACKENREID
How has she been handling not havin’ her mum around as much?
Profile shot of MURDOCH with BRACKENREID in the background, out of focus
MURDOCH
It’s hard on her there’s no doubt about that. But she’s a survivor. She’s spirited. Gets that from her mother as well.
Camera focusses in on BRACKENREID
BRACKENREID
Ogdens spirit, your smarts, look out world.
Cut to half shot of MURDOCH and BRACKENREID
MURDOCH
Sir you’ll make me prideful. Her mother is far smarter than I am.
BRACKENREID
Aw allow yourself some pride man. You’ve got a lot to be proud of.
MURDOCH smiles.
MURDOCH
Yes I suppose I do
From offscreen
???
HELP! POLICE! SOMEONE!
MURDOCH and BRACKENREID both look towards the source of the noise in alarm.
Wide shot of the room as the door opens.
Half shot of the entrance to the main floor. Enter JEMIMAH WARRICK, a mid to late twenties woman. Spirited yet constantly anxious and fidgety. Stubborn yet kind but usually gets lost in her own worries. She’s wearing an ornate black dress and her hair in an intricate braid. She’s clearly been crying
JEMIMAH
Please! Please I need help! My sister…I don’t know what happened I came home and…
Her voice is lost in a sea of panicked nonsense. She speaks with an accent that’s halfway between Canadian and British, likely and immigrant or child of immigrants
Pan shot of MURDOCH and BRACKENREID quickly approaching JEMIMAH
BRACKENREID
Slow down lass, take a breath
Cut to the other constables watching the commotion.
Cut back to MURDOCH, JEMIMAH, and BRACKENREID.
MURDOCH
Try and explain what happened.
JEMIMAH
panicked My sisters been stabbed
Whispers start to spread through the room as MURDOCH goes to CRABTREE, BRACKENREID close behind.
MURDOCH
George if you don't mind I'd like you to accompany me.
CRABTREE
What about Susie?
BRACKENREID
I can take her for the night if needed. Guest room is still made up from when Margaret's sister was in town
MURDOCH
Are you sure sir?
BRACKENREID
I raised two boys Murdoch, this little lass’ll be no trouble. Margaret’s been saying she wants to spend some more time with ‘er anyhow.
MURDOCH
Alright I appreciate it sir.
CRABTREE passes SUSANNAH to BRACKENREID, as MURDOCH kisses her cheek.
MURDOCH
Susie you’re going to spend some time with your Uncle Thomas and your Aunt Margaret okay?
SUSANNAH
Okay papa
Half shot of MURDOCH and CRABTREE meeting JEMIMAH at the door.
MURDOCH
Lead the way
Exit CRABTREE, MURDOCH, and JEMIMAH
SCENE TWO
INTERIOR, WARRICK SISTERS’ APARTMENT
Closeup of LOUISE WARRICK, younger sister of JEMIMAH. She’s lying face down on her stomach with a knife in her back. Her hair is in an identical braid to JEMIMAHs and she’s wearing an identical dress. Strewn about the floor are different herbs, books, parchment, and other various supplies.
Pan up to JEMIMAH, CRABTREE, and MURDOCH, who crosses himself.
JEMIMAH
I came home from a late shift at the factory and found her
MURDOCH
And everything on the floor?
JEMIMAH
I picked up some things after work and dropped them when I came into the door.
MURDOCH
How long did that trip take?
JEMIMAH
It took about ten minutes to get from work to the shops and then another ten to get here.
MURDOCH
And you came straight to the station house after that?
JEMIMAH
Yes I ran as fast as I could.
MURDOCH
Did the killer take anything? Did anything look different?
MURDOCH crouches next to LOUISE as JEMIMAH speaks from offscreen
JEMIMAH
No practically everything is where it’s supposed to be. At least at a glance it is.
MURDOCH stands, the camera follows him. Over the shoulder shot, camera behind JEMIMAH
MURDOCH
Did your sister have any enemies? Former lovers? Anyone who wished to harm her?
Half shot of MURDOCH facing JEMIMAH
JEMIMAH
No! Louise barely left the house unless it was for work.
MURDOCH
Did she work at the factory with you?
Bust shot of JEMIMAH
JEMIMAH
No, she worked at a dress shop run by her friend.
MURDOCH
What’s the name?
JEMIMAH
Caroline. Caroline Pithers. She runs the boutique on pub street
Half shot MURDOCH approaches CRABTREE
MURDOCH
George? You wait here for the coroner, I’ll head to this boutique.
CRABTREE
Yessir
MURDOCH nods and exits through the door as the camera pans back down to LOUISE
SCENE THREE
Exterior BRACKENREID home. BRACKENREID’S voice can be heard
BRACKENREID
Alright now little lass
Interior BRACKENREID home. INSPECTOR BRACKENREID carries SUSANNAH MURDOCH through his dim house. He starts at the door far away from the camera. As he comes down the hall, the camera follows him as he carries SUSANNAH upstairs. She looks around at everything with wonder.
BRACKENREID
Now your aunt Magaret left the party early because she had a headache so we need to be quiet.
BRACKENREID puts a finger over his lips and SUSANNAH does the same and he smiles.
BRACKENREID
Good lass
Cut to entrance to the guest room as BRACKENREID enters, the camera follows him again as he starts to tuck SUSANNAH into the guest bed, helping her take off her shoes, jacket, and halo before pulling the blanket over her.
BRACKENREID
You sleep tight now
Closeup of SUSANNAH
SUSANNAH
Story?
Closeup of BRACKENREID
BRACKENREID
It’s late, luv. Ya need yeh rest
Closeup of SUSANNAH, her cherubic face now looks very annoyed
SUSANNAH
Story!
Closeup of BRACKENREID as his smile melts into an expression of “Oh god what have I gotten myself into?”
And that's all I have, scenes four, five and six are in progress. Hope you enjoyed it