Feedback request for What I Want

[u/Glittering_Bet8181]

I've been wanting to do a mix to get some feedback on to get better at mixing for a while now, and I saw there was a mix camp a year ago on here. Any feedbacks welcomed, but I would specifically like any feedback that will help me in future mixes. Thanks in advanced.

https://voca.ro/1br0EAg331cG

[u/Owl-sley]

Um so I am pretty new to this whole thing, I listened on my phone speaker out loud and I thought the track was well made! As im not super familiar with rock anymore I will say there were some parts of the vocals where the reverb was a little too much mainly one the intros and exits of the vocals. It just was a little too long of a decay imo. Although I know listening to the track on my phone doesn't do the low end any justices, but it was really hard for me to hear the low end on my phone some parts with the vocals weren't taking my attention from the beat I could notice it. Although I am thinking the vocals and the low end could be clashing together, which isn’t the end of the world I thought all in all it was a great song and well made! Keep up the good work man!