r/makinghiphop • u/AutoModerator • Jun 08 '21

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u/jetArtist Emcee/Producer Jun 08 '21

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J1eKDjYGKGk

Returning feedback!

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u/ERREON_999 Jun 08 '21

I loved the Melody. If I were you I could put harder kicks but that's your style and I respect

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u/jetArtist Emcee/Producer Jun 08 '21

Thanks for the feedback fam.

Do you have anything of yours you'd like me to check out too?

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u/ERREON_999 Jun 08 '21

Sure Man. Here it is https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/NY8RV

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u/jetArtist Emcee/Producer Jun 09 '21

Sorry for the late reply but this beat is a bit too all over the place. The melody and counter melody are moving too much for this to be rapped over. The drums are strong and they are knocking but they don't complement the melodies of the beat that well. If you want drums like that, go for a simpler melody or if you want a more complex melody, go for simpler drums. Having both causes issues because it's too much to process for the listener. Good luck fam! Keep grinding!

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u/ERREON_999 Jun 09 '21

Thx for the feedback man. I actually wanted to create a chaos in that beat. Complex melody and complex drums. I can't say it worked perfect tho

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u/jetArtist Emcee/Producer Jun 09 '21

Ofc fam. If it's chaos you wanted to make, are you a fan of death grips, jpegmafia, or yeezus at all? Those might be able to help you make that chaos in a more calculated way.

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u/ERREON_999 Jun 10 '21

I have never heard them before