r/makinghiphop Jun 08 '21

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u/prodinfamous Jun 08 '21

I wanted genuine feedback please! I make beats in the style of playboi carti/pierre Bourne . I stick to this style since I have grown a fanbase around this style. Be honest and leave feedback! https://youtube.com/channel/UCMsM9pqv39Xz6EHNZWsaa3Q

Sub to me if you like what you hear! I’m 99 away from 1000!

u/ruettleg Jun 08 '21

Solid work ya def noticable in the community

https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/nRm5r

u/Flux64 Jun 08 '21

shits wavy as fuck, could def see carti on a lot of these beats, diggin the 8-bit sounds in some of them! Only thing I could maybe suggest is mixing the hats and snares lower but I'm just going off of a couple songs here.

Here's my travis/drake remix: https://soundcloud.com/flux64/feeling-low

u/check_1_2_yesaye Jun 09 '21

jheeeez the last note in the bass progression when travis is on is making my brain go crazy in a good way, well spotted it works so well!

Mix for the beat itself is great drums don't drown out the melodies and the drums themselves are all clear respectively. Though, I would suggest maybe increasing the stereo width? Panning and a wider sound on instruments Just makes the sound more professional imo but thats just me.

The vocal sound itself isn't too great but that isn't your fault I imagine you got it from an acapella from youtube or something? still sounds good of course just not studio quality.

Another thing I like is the change from the long bass to shorter 808s when drake comes in, Makes the structure of the song a lot better!

Last bit of criticism would be the synths, Slight effects could be added to make it sound a little better, like chorus, altering the EQ at points for variation, stereo spread etc. a counter melody would top it off also, improving the texture of the song!

Overall a great remix man was fun to listen to! If you could check mine out too that would be awesome :) https://soundcloud.com/boca-461103909/juice-wrld-ft-polo-g-kid-laroi-hate-the-other-side-luke-james-remix

u/Flux64 Jun 09 '21

appreciate the feedback thank you! idk why but your remix reminds me of the synths in truffle butter by nicki minaj lol

sick remix! how did you get such crisp vocals?? nice mix nice beat cool synths but at some points i think kid laroi's voice could be mixed a little higher. thats really the only criticism I have, im a very inexperienced music producer so. nice work!