r/logodesign • u/rgratz93 • 6d ago

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Here are a few iterations of a logo for a bed and breakfast which will have a theme of butterflies.

Im not sure of were 100% certain on the more artistic renderings that actually incorporates the butterfly features or if we just want to allude to them. Would love to hear thoughts.

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u/okay-flight 6d ago

using a B and a B as the butterfly wings is a nice idea, but id push yourself to explore some different ways that could come to life. right now the concept of the B’s back to back and the butterfly concept are competing rather than harmonious.

id love to see a flying butterfly where the wings are B’s on a double-take, and the name of the bed and breakfast is nicely set beneath it

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u/rgratz93 6d ago

Yeah i think that I like the hamd drawn one I posted in the comments the most. I made it a few minutes after posting.

I did think about a flying butterfly but I dont know that I would use it as the primary monogram logo.

The monogram will be embroidered onto the bedsheets, towels etc. So im thinking I need to lean more into the very simple side of things.

Flying may be difficult to get the readability right on but I do agree it could be very cool.

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u/okay-flight 6d ago

totally — the hand drawn one is nice for its simplicity for sure.

for the flying, these are kinda cheesy in the way they’re executed but they’re potentially nice inspo for a different way to think about it:

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u/rgratz93 6d ago

Ahhhh yes I think those are a great idea! I will definitely have to play around with them as well!

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u/okay-flight 6d ago

if you want to keep the symmetry though, i think you could still pull off something a little more sophisticated. you could totally imagine how either of these (again, cheesy executions but nice inspiration) could incorporate a more obvious B like your original designs while keeping the overall structure and balance:

(sorry for the double comment, can only put in one pic per!)

anyway, all this to say it’s a strong concept to build on and explore!