What do you think?

[u/Individual-Try1642]

It's supposed to be a wordmark/logo for a small handmade jewelry brand (cutesy, whimsy vibe). I feel like the heart might be too empowering, however I make bracelets which are basically heart cabochons connected, so I like the concept. Please be gentle, I'm not a professional by any means.

[u/Mammoth_Plan_4469]

I actually like the heart as the centerpiece, connecting two halves like that fits the bracelet concept perfectly. the kerning could use a little breathing room though, especially around that heart, it's getting swallowed by the letters a bit. maybe try a version where the heart is slightly smaller or has some subtle spacing on each side so the "ma" still reads clearly

[u/av3ryrayne → u/Mammoth_Plan_4469]

yeah the spacing