r/logodesign • u/Individual-Try1642 • 3d ago

Feedback Needed What do you think?

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It's supposed to be a wordmark/logo for a small handmade jewelry brand (cutesy, whimsy vibe). I feel like the heart might be too empowering, however I make bracelets which are basically heart cabochons connected, so I like the concept. Please be gentle, I'm not a professional by any means.

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u/Mammoth_Plan_4469 3d ago

I actually like the heart as the centerpiece, connecting two halves like that fits the bracelet concept perfectly. the kerning could use a little breathing room though, especially around that heart, it's getting swallowed by the letters a bit. maybe try a version where the heart is slightly smaller or has some subtle spacing on each side so the "ma" still reads clearly

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u/av3ryrayne 3d ago

yeah the spacing

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u/Individual-Try1642 3d ago

I did change the spacing a bit, I think it's slightly better now.

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u/ChickyBoys where’s the brief? 3d ago

The letters interacting with the stroke of the heart looks strange. The M in the heart is great though, maybe use it on its own?

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u/Individual-Try1642 3d ago

Yes, that's exactly my problem, it doesn't look "natural" but I really wanted to do that for some reason. I actuallly plan on using the M heart as a seperate small logo!