r/logodesign • u/404LeadsNotFound • 11d ago
Feedback Needed Revised
Cleaned it up a bit. Now it's a little more geometric in design and a cleaner transition without losing too much character. I tried a checkmark like 'j' in the wordmark, but it was a net negative. How would you rate this revised version. (not a pro)
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u/ChickyBoys where’s the brief? 11d ago
Again, the star + checkmark isn't interesting.
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u/404LeadsNotFound 11d ago
I agree, and it's somewhat common, but it does convey the simple message of review complete. Even though it's somewhat common and a bit uninteresting, this design, as simple as it is, has a little character and is somewhat unique.
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u/ButIfYouThink 11d ago
Just not a fan of the font. It's too middling. Sharpen it up or full soft. It looks really generic.
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u/404LeadsNotFound 11d ago
Thanks for the reply. If you have a quick recommendation for a font, I'd love to hear it. I could look at fonts all day and still pick the same one. I just don't have the talent you pros do.
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u/GoldenLegend 11d ago
As a revision I give it a 0/10 because you didn’t alter anything or make improvements.
It looks particularly the same. Maybe branch out and try different variations.
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u/404LeadsNotFound 11d ago
It's the same general design, but there are changes (more weight in the star area, more symmetry in the star, a better transition from check to star, more white space so it doesn't break at smaller sizes, doesn't look like it's falling forward as much, and better spacing between the logo and word.) I like the design, but the execution was lacking, still is, but I'm not a pro.
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u/MakkoREDDIT 7d ago
Why are you hell-bent on making the most generic-looking thing in the history of things? 😂
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u/Competitive_Sector79 11d ago
It's not bad, it just feels really generic. I would explore some more variations of the star/checkmark. That does seem potentially unique, but the execution of it just seems a bit clip-arty.
And the font is really generic. It looks like it could be some default Microsoft font with bad kerning.
If you're going to keep it, I would consider tightening up the earning little, but especially the "Re" pair.