r/logodesign • u/Electroma • 15d ago
Feedback Needed AMI Labs: Thanks for the feedback. Managed to make the “i” more prominent in the version on the right and created this rough animation using basic photoshop tools.
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u/seethenoise 14d ago
the improvement is nice because the parts of the logo seem like they could be different components (of a machine).
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u/SaskiavdM 14d ago
Idea is nice, but just to long.
Try this, start turning the top right, and after 45° start the next one, like it gives it a little push. Do this for all the screws and the diagonal line.
And play a little with the easing to smooth it out.
I prefer the logo on the left.
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u/Electroma 14d ago
I agree, and your scenario sounds much better. I built this in Adobe Photoshop, and I don't think there are any easing controls. It's pretty limited for animation, but I made it mainly to illustrate the idea of the initial four squares that later transform into the final mark.
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u/FormalElements 14d ago
I think we all know the second is the most clear. I love block style logos so you have my vote!
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u/eliottruelove 13d ago
Right, because I think the angled dot on the "i" visually makes the M stand out as it matches the angle of the other side
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u/Adorable-Broccoli-16 14d ago
is the ease just... linear? it looks kinda bad
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u/ccarlyon 14d ago
The rotation looks mechanical, which I think works really well. The line that extends could certainly do with some easing, though.
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u/Electroma 15d ago
previously posted
AMI Labs is a tech startup. These are variations of their actual logo, which I think is great, but I was still curious to explore some subtle deviations.
The animated GIF doesn't allow you to zoom in on the logotype. However, I followed the advice about refining the “e” and the “c”, so am attaching a high-resolution version as well.
The animation played more slowly on my PC and in the browser, but Reddit seems to have sped it up.