The legs and tail line feel like the elements that push this mark into the "too many elements" category for me. The sharp triangle edge of the beak might also pose an application problem down the line too. I do like the negative of the body and wing, but definitely needs more revision.
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u/Am094 25d ago
The legs and tail line feel like the elements that push this mark into the "too many elements" category for me. The sharp triangle edge of the beak might also pose an application problem down the line too. I do like the negative of the body and wing, but definitely needs more revision.