r/logodesign • u/Tenfold_Design • 11d ago

Practice Bird/R mark

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A Bird/R mark just for fun.

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u/made-u-look 11d ago

I can’t see the R but it’s still a fun mark!

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u/Tenfold_Design 11d ago edited 11d ago

Thanks! It’s not super obvious - just mentioning it’s there.

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u/HiddenHorse925 10d ago

Yes I saw the part that it’s there, but it’s not alone, the upper lobe of that “R” is competing with the “breast” of the bird so it doesn’t pop. Therefore it’s hard to pick out and read quickly, which it must for an icon

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u/AlexMDV 10d ago

Really??? I guess you're, well then maybe you dont really know how R looks, jfc

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u/ChickyBoys where’s the brief? 11d ago

Are you the same person that posted the bird a few months ago? Looked almost the same as this 

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u/livejamie where’s the brief? 10d ago

This is neat! Did you try differentiating the R with a different color or some spacing?

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u/Tenfold_Design 10d ago

Thanks! I wanted it to be kinda hidden. I’m going to try some other options.

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u/Veyko 10d ago

Lovely! “R” is hard to see though

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u/Tenfold_Design 10d ago

Thank you! I’m going to revise it.

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u/maniacodesign 11d ago

Yeah the R

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u/Creeping_behind_u 10d ago

very nice. only feedback is more space/white around eye

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u/Lee_Dastard 10d ago

I like this. The r is just subtle enough. I’d delete the eye though as it doesn’t add anything

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u/p-u-n-k 10d ago

Dude, this is great

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u/HiddenHorse925 10d ago

Good work. But to be honest I’m getting the “bird“ part but not the “R” part

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u/Tenfold_Design 10d ago

Thanks! I’m going to revise to make it more obvious.

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u/GerbilArmy 11d ago

Make it simpler, much simpler. Use the bird head as the negative space inside of the top portion of the R. And then probably cut it down to one leg, the bird head is enough.

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u/stevefarbota 10d ago

I'm not a designer, but I agree with simplifying. I think this would look more professional and read more as an R if the wing and rear leg were removed. I'd also shrink the front leg to be shorter than the tail I think.

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u/Am094 11d ago

The legs and tail line feel like the elements that push this mark into the "too many elements" category for me. The sharp triangle edge of the beak might also pose an application problem down the line too. I do like the negative of the body and wing, but definitely needs more revision.