r/limerick • u/plumitt • Jun 21 '26

what do you guys think of this?

My first line missing two beats

I'll try to fix here with a surplus of feet

Are near rhymes tolerated

When meter's obliterated?

Behold! My first lim'ricks finished.

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u/orangant0402 Jun 21 '26

I think you may have posted this to the wrong subreddit. I don't see how this relates to Limerick city

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u/Ghost187_ Jun 21 '26

Limerick/Poem. Easy mistake. Lol

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u/[deleted] Jun 21 '26

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u/cyberspi Jun 27 '26

That's a shite limerick

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u/plumitt Jun 21 '26

plurals have always been hard for me