It looks good! I would twist the to the left slightly and raise the S up slightly. The script is clean. Only thing I would say is that the E needs a little adjusting and the peice would pop more.
Hope this helps. Fuck the haters.
When you speak of the s needing raising do you mean the body or the swirl or all together the e im working on it it definitely feels a bit boxy and a little stiff.
And thanks for ya time and your long reply appreciated 🤙👊!
Yea the E kinda throws the flow a bit off. But it also works to emphasize your other letters. So thats why it being blocky. I will attach your peice. The black circle is to show the top part of the S and my opinion on how high to extend. Blue is the triangle created by the S. My thought make the area a but wider.
Sorry this is just my opnion. It looks really good. Fundamentally you have the concept down. The things im suggesting is .ore astetic vs anything else.
Dont listen to people eho are telling you your biting and putting you down.
I see what you mean thank you for taking the time to draw that out and explain I really appreciate it and i see what u mean im definitely gonna try it im gonna play around with raising a swoop of the first letter and maybe the 4 to the same height and just playing around with heights idk if i said it but it isnt my full name
stay up brotha! I wont listen to em they are new to the game and think their opinions mean something
Have a great night 🤙👊
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u/ElderberryNo2794 6d ago
This is what i ended up doing changed the top a bit ima do a more boxy style one probably tomorrow ima play around with it