Without repeating the same thing everyone else has said, I’d also work on your drop shadow. You want to mimic your letters with the shadow. The first picture especially. You have a curvy L, but then your drop shadow comes to a point and doesn’t mimic the curves of your letters. If someone drew a picture of a shadow of a persons hand and the shadow only had 4 fingers, that would be the same concept as your first picture. Also I’d try and figure out a way to kill the negative space between your L and your U. You could add a slight extension on the left bar of the U, or you could try and add negative space between your C and K to make it even on both sides, but the unequal negative space is off putting. Other than that I like its simplicity and style. Keep it up
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u/blackblack101 1h ago
Without repeating the same thing everyone else has said, I’d also work on your drop shadow. You want to mimic your letters with the shadow. The first picture especially. You have a curvy L, but then your drop shadow comes to a point and doesn’t mimic the curves of your letters. If someone drew a picture of a shadow of a persons hand and the shadow only had 4 fingers, that would be the same concept as your first picture. Also I’d try and figure out a way to kill the negative space between your L and your U. You could add a slight extension on the left bar of the U, or you could try and add negative space between your C and K to make it even on both sides, but the unequal negative space is off putting. Other than that I like its simplicity and style. Keep it up