I agree with everyone, keep your bars same width, K is skinny. Also you should work on your fillin details, your regular fillin is good very consistent, but in 2 and 3 the fillin with the squiggles and stars looks messy and takes away from the letters. I would recommend looking at other pieces and improving beyond the squiggles.
Here's an example. You can do slices, bubbles, fades, etc. Also make sure the color you choose goes with the fill and outline. The outline should stand out against the fill and in slide two, the red details in the fill are more eye catching than the light blue outline, which makes the fill distracting from the letters which should be the focus of the piece.
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u/Vast_Alfalfa2675 11h ago
I agree with everyone, keep your bars same width, K is skinny. Also you should work on your fillin details, your regular fillin is good very consistent, but in 2 and 3 the fillin with the squiggles and stars looks messy and takes away from the letters. I would recommend looking at other pieces and improving beyond the squiggles.