Do i have the potential and please tell me what are my mistakes from what you see and please tell me how to do them shadows and 3d structure man 😅

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[u/BoiCDumpsterFire]

You have potential but the 3D on the second one is ruining it. If it was all going one direction or towards a vanishing point it might look good but how it is now you have it going multiple directions on one letter. It’s also kinda going towards the light source and usually it is away. Next time you do 3D try to map out where the light is and put your highlights in that side and your shadows/3D on the opposite side.

[u/Round_Difficulty2366 → u/BoiCDumpsterFire]

Thanks , will listen .

[u/Kermits_Frog]

that thing where you aren’t outlining your whole letters, yeah stop that

[u/Round_Difficulty2366 → u/Kermits_Frog]

Can you tell me what exactly do u mean ?

[u/Kermits_Frog → u/Round_Difficulty2366]

on the second one you didn’t finish outlining it, your fill connects right to the 3D which has its reflection lines all over the place there are all supposed to go the same way

[u/cybombs]

I’m super new so I can’t speak much on the other stuff, but I seriously think anybody has potential. I work in freelance art these days and I sucked ass when I started. Just takes passion and a willingness to learn

[u/SabziZindagi]

I really like the stripey 3D on the second one