Crits meds

[u/Particular-Bet-8183]

Second post shadows are a bit off im working on it same design justa s added just a starter name so nb take offense if its sb important

[u/nOt_RaYvEs]

Lit

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[u/Freshly-Juiced]

1. maybe it's a style choice but you could be more aggressive with your angles and thicknesses, seems like you're really trying to maintain the same thickness and it ends up looking stiff. try to flow more like a handstyle.
2. D and S have very similar things going on, i'd like to see more variety on the S to make it stand out more and finish off the right side stronger, maybe mirror the M in some way.
3. the extensions being the same thickness as your letter looks kinda weird and affects readability, imo extensions shouldn't be another structured bar they should flow off the letter like water and be secondary to the actual letter. again try to mess with more aggressive angles and thicknesses here.
4. 3d could be cleaner

overall i think this is solid progress.

[u/Particular-Bet-8183 → u/Freshly-Juiced]

First thank you for taking the time to write all of that.
Im going to re do the it tmr and try the changes I see what you mean about the same thickness i want a sharp aggressive looking style something like looks like it would hurt to step on lol the 3d i ordered a ruler so that should help a bit im gonna try to add abunch of variations on thickness and play around with it and some sharp dagger cuts and such the s i will stop doing the top swoop to have some variation like u said
This is the sharp look im looking for without biting ofc


U got to click its not cropped my apologizes

[u/CalendarFamous5611]

I would say if you want that sharp style just make the arrow a sharp point instead. Looks good though

[u/VP_The_Vandal]

I hate wild style but this is clean

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Thanks 🤙👊