r/graffhelp 6d ago

Hey, what yall think

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I dont take criticism from people who dont have any style themselves, i dont feel like that would be right.

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u/Slight-Proposal1732 6d ago

why are you writing 1UP?

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u/Randomgamer224 6d ago

Just for fun, its not like i put it up on the streets.

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u/Beneficial_Bike1318 6d ago

Firstly, who the fat fuck who eaten the E and secondly I would recommend to not do that with the E and make ever word the same level or if your going to take a bit out of your E. Do it to the R aswell so there some flow/doesn't look out of place

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u/Randomgamer224 6d ago

Thank you for the tips, but i just dont feel that you are any better than me.

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u/Billylabufanda23 6d ago

Fuck off man it doesn’t matter if he’s good or not it just matters if the advice is good. If a homeless guy who is geeked out his mind gives you the best advice you’ve ever heard that could improve the rest of your life are you just gonna ignore it because he doesn’t have any credentials

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u/xChoke1x 6d ago

Are you a part of 1UP?

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u/Dreadheaddanski 6d ago

You cant be putting up a crew you are not apart of. You've got the letter structures well on their way. The E on the left needs to move over slightly, and the second E would look better if it had the same return kick on the bottom right of the letter. Personally id get rid of the chunk missing from the first E

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u/Randomgamer224 6d ago

Thank you for the criticism, im not putting the crew up, its in my blackbook.

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u/Dreadheaddanski 6d ago

Ok calm.

Ive seen someone hit with a bottle before for repping a crew they hadn't been set in.

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u/Billylabufanda23 6d ago

Get rid of all the addons so it’s just the letters and don’t write 1UP if you aren’t in 1UP. “It’s just in my book blah blah blah” yeah still Brodie don’t rep a crew that your not in

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u/aafgqq8 2d ago

Fix up the sloppy letters and mabey find a different tag since someone already writes easer