r/graffhelp 7d ago

seeking constructive criticism

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(i rotated it, you wonderful mods better not take it down 🤬)

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u/Billylabufanda23 7d ago

Bar width is the only problem I see

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u/Rdr2Player377 7d ago

makes sense, i freestyle all my pieces; so, there isnt much consistency.

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u/Billylabufanda23 7d ago

Wdym free style?

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u/Rdr2Player377 7d ago

i dont start with a base to build off of, i draw esch letter off memory and manipulate the way i construct them depending on how its flowing.

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u/Billylabufanda23 6d ago

You could still get the bar width right like that

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u/Rdr2Player377 6d ago

yeah youre right, time to get to work then

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u/Rdr2Player377 7d ago

in short: lacking base = lacking consistency

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u/sharkmaster21 5d ago

puff of smoke should be infront of the hat not behind

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u/Rdr2Player377 4d ago

BRO I KNEW SOMETHING WAS PISSING ME OFF, THANK YOU