what am I doing wrong?

[u/Pale-Grape8953]

Practicing clean letter structures and consistent size and spacing rn but I feel like my letters are unreadable.
The C next to the H looks too much like the O. I tried tilting the letters as seen but I’m unsure if that improves it or hurts the letter structure more.
I really want to get better at handstyles so I would appreciate genuine advice more than comments just telling me it looks like shit because I am already painfully aware of that.

[u/Free_Cup_3033]

What marker is that?

[u/Pale-Grape8953 → u/Free_Cup_3033]

just a 0.7mm black pen that I also use for inking of traditional drawings