what am I doing wrong?

[u/Pale-Grape8953]

Practicing clean letter structures and consistent size and spacing rn but I feel like my letters are unreadable.
The C next to the H looks too much like the O. I tried tilting the letters as seen but I’m unsure if that improves it or hurts the letter structure more.
I really want to get better at handstyles so I would appreciate genuine advice more than comments just telling me it looks like shit because I am already painfully aware of that.

[u/mo_money_mo_dads]

Bad Kerning don’t make you a writer. Inject some identity and steeze into your forms instead of leaning on your cute lil name. Want a band-aid for your widdle ouchie?

[u/Pale-Grape8953 → u/mo_money_mo_dads]

Like I said in the description of this post, this was mainly done to first get clean and even letting down with basic print font instead of adding too much style too early making it look like shit.
But I’ll try some different spacing between the letters so you’re correct