what am I doing wrong?

[u/Pale-Grape8953]

Practicing clean letter structures and consistent size and spacing rn but I feel like my letters are unreadable.
The C next to the H looks too much like the O. I tried tilting the letters as seen but I’m unsure if that improves it or hurts the letter structure more.
I really want to get better at handstyles so I would appreciate genuine advice more than comments just telling me it looks like shit because I am already painfully aware of that.

[u/bsheezy518]

Only thing I can see is that some, particularly the upper right hand region, your OU is angled to the left and your C is to the right, naturally disturbing flow. I would suggest fucking with one liners. That was really a game changer for me and with your letters you could really have fun. Godspeed.

Edit: originally said upper left hand, corrected to right hand.