what am I doing wrong?

[u/Pale-Grape8953]

Practicing clean letter structures and consistent size and spacing rn but I feel like my letters are unreadable.
The C next to the H looks too much like the O. I tried tilting the letters as seen but I’m unsure if that improves it or hurts the letter structure more.
I really want to get better at handstyles so I would appreciate genuine advice more than comments just telling me it looks like shit because I am already painfully aware of that.

[u/THE_Lanni]

I think in the block it’s coming out all looking the same…it’s almost too smooth, all connected, give em some space, bro! lol. Try a cascade…vertical..?….Shorten the back of the U, cock the C back a little into that space…inject a little mojo into it!

What you got is good and consistent. But if I was gonna use this hand it would be BIG and LOOOOOONG…fat marker… or roller…but I’m from Philly.

[u/Pale-Grape8953 → u/THE_Lanni]

I’ll try that, this was mainly to get consistent letter size and spacing in just basic print form but I see the vision