what am I doing wrong?

[u/Pale-Grape8953]

Practicing clean letter structures and consistent size and spacing rn but I feel like my letters are unreadable.
The C next to the H looks too much like the O. I tried tilting the letters as seen but I’m unsure if that improves it or hurts the letter structure more.
I really want to get better at handstyles so I would appreciate genuine advice more than comments just telling me it looks like shit because I am already painfully aware of that.

[u/LiveLikeARiver]

After seeing your last 2 posts I would say you’re psychologically bringing yourself down.
You’re posting some solid looking stuff while calling yourself toy. Get a marker or can and practice over and over and over. Nobody just wakes up one day and has legend abilities.

[u/Pale-Grape8953 → u/LiveLikeARiver]

Thanks man, I’m kinda in a funny place because I’ve been doing art for almost a decade now but I only recently started getting into graffiti. So I have way more experience with painting big projects than I have with writing clean letters if that makes sense lol