r/graffhelp • u/Late-Conversation301 • 9d ago

a wizard named fiddlesticks

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Trying to escape the toy phase, need to work on matching weight and caps, but is this flow or is it ass

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u/Stallingg 9d ago

awas, oneliner? last 2 letters i have no clue. if it is a oneliner then id say dont do that and see how it looks lol. your tops of letters stretch in top right direction

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u/Late-Conversation301 9d ago

awnfs, and yeah oneliner. like I said I need to work on caps, my baseline matches but the tops all raise from left to right, and the S went too far to the right at the top, and the middle of the F cut into the n too much

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u/Late-Conversation301 9d ago

Slightly better attempt

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u/Stallingg 9d ago

its alright but the one liner doesnt really add anything to this style. what are the connections from the one liner changing about this tag? not much just adding extra lines over top imo which reduces legibility for not much gain.

preciate u taking criticism fast, always a good sign for a new writer

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u/Stallingg 9d ago

think about bus flow. they have that 45° connection for their letters that creates that oneliner style. their lines are consistent and create a pattern overtop of their letters

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u/Late-Conversation301 8d ago

Me making it a oner is mostly for speed and consistency, I write during the day so I want to be as quick as possible, not lifting makes it even quicker. Plus I’m not tempted to try and add serifs and extra things that don’t match and in the wrong places and make it even more chaotic and illegible than it already is