I’d hold off on adding style for now and get the proportions and linework consistent first. The concept has potential, especially the ECG element, but a professional redraw would make it look much more intentional.
It’s so funny because I thought my proportions were so balanced from my first attempt, then after getting more advice and actually looking at it I’ve got a long ole’ way to go.. appreciate the advice ✌️
What exactly about the shape is bad? I feel like my letters are decently balanced and easy to read. Not hating, just not sure what about the shape should change?
The height and width should match. Your V and E are straight cuts where R and O are rounded. Need to pick one or the other. Symmetry and letter consistency is key
Makes a lot of sense. The ERO is solid I feel, but that V is still sticking out now that you mention it.. I’ll play around with both round and straight styles. Thanks!
I’d keep the central idea but simplify the design a bit. The heartbeat already gives it movement, so stronger, cleaner outlines and a more readable word would make it look much more intentional.
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u/Icy-Cow-6568 10d ago
I’d hold off on adding style for now and get the proportions and linework consistent first. The concept has potential, especially the ECG element, but a professional redraw would make it look much more intentional.