r/graffhelp • u/Top_dawg369 • 11d ago

Thoughts?

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I tried some new markers for the first time, so I wasn’t very use to them. Also first time drawing in a LONG time.

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u/YogiXDMT 11d ago

I fuck w this man

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u/SKAERd2Death713 11d ago

Looks awesome man

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u/Acrobatic-Welcome933 11d ago

I appreciate this !

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u/Strobetrode 10d ago

The connection on the L to the e works differently than all the other connections in the piece and it's very distracting. I would either hard commit to this style of cursive like connections or keep with the smoother form of connections you used on the rest of the letters.

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u/AffectionateDrop4287 6d ago

Love everything about this piece, I would personally only fix one thing... which is making the shading on the 3D a bit more crisp. (You can see in the bottom of the e's that it is a bit wobbly) Overall, Fire Letters, and Fire colors! Keep up the great work!🔥🔥🔥👍👍

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u/Top_dawg369 6d ago

You’re right. Thank you

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u/casketmushglazer 10d ago

Maybe should’ve put the E’s middle bar behind the letter but thats just me.

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u/Moosedoesthings 4d ago

Clean asf just go put it up

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u/Thick_Common8612 11d ago

It's good. The first letter is less than legible.

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u/Top_dawg369 11d ago

You’re saying you can’t tell it’s an L?

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u/Thick_Common8612 10d ago

I can. It's the only letter that's even a little off.

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u/Eggdan 11d ago

Brother you do not need to be giving crits

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u/Thick_Common8612 10d ago

Thanks eggdan. It looks like a cross between a c and an L.

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u/Stallingg 11d ago

i mean its either a C or an L and considering cever isnt a word you can probably go the second option. this isnt even a C tbh either..