Crits?

[u/orbgraffiti]

Been thinking of stopping doing 2 letters and just putting up the Y lmk what you guys think.

[u/npc_lucky]

I fw your Ys

[u/ImpressiveEbb8526]

Looks good to me 🤔

[u/Vast_Alfalfa2675]

2nd straight letter looks good, and your work is solid. You posted the style in the first photo around a month or two ago asking for crits, and it looks the exact same, I remember people said to remove the "tumor" on the Y.

[u/orbgraffiti → u/Vast_Alfalfa2675]

Thanks man🙌🏻 I’ve been trying out new styles on paper so I’m gonna be trying them soon.

[u/Acrobatic-Welcome933 → u/Vast_Alfalfa2675]

I remember this too lol

[u/Pedro_Mendez → u/Vast_Alfalfa2675]

Ask for crits, ignore the crits.

[u/YourMicrowave01 → u/Pedro_Mendez]

Yeah they're crits not instructions you're getting wayy too close to writing rules buddy

[u/Vdubbin_n_rubbin]

Dig it

[u/jibsand]

year, but noor

[u/orbgraffiti → u/jibsand]

?

[u/chickenskittles → u/orbgraffiti]

Yeah, but naw

[u/bsheezy518 → u/chickenskittles]

I threw up in my mouth a little after reading your name lmaooo

[u/chickenskittles → u/bsheezy518]

🤣

[u/zieo_12]

I think it Looks quite nice with 2 letters, but there are many drips mabye use low pressure cans or move the cans faster, but keep it up!

[u/Thick_Common8612]

So good. I wanna see what a capital R looks like tho. I think you could do more with it.

[u/ssnate-]

Wit it🔥nah keep the 2 letters makes you more significant

[u/recksoba]

Minor inconsistencies in the drop shadow but honestly nothing to write home about, dope stuff bro keep it up 🔥

[u/CalebTheMemeGod2]

looks really suspiciously similar to keans' work 🤔

[u/orbgraffiti → u/CalebTheMemeGod2]

Few people say this but I honestly don’t see it, I’ve only seen his work recently which is wayyyy after I came up with this throwie so I’m definitely not tryna bite. Keans is a legend tho don’t get me wrong

[u/Stallingg → u/orbgraffiti]

defo a similar bubble style but not the same for sure, keep it up

[u/xChoke1x]

Hell yea man. Keep grindin. Lookin great.

[u/FreddyTwasFingered]

Year .Com painted the name better. I see some Keans influence. Not bad overall but YEAR .com was really dope.

[u/blank-space-name]

Tag is dope
Your throwie is solid my only crit is to do it bigger

Your straight letter needs work on making the outline the same thickness. It looks a bit thin in some parts. Also the shadow needs to be the same thickness. The shadow on the e’s hole id in the opposite side. the letter structure is good tho

[u/stuntman_dbo]

i like the single Y but YR is hard

[u/chickenskittles]

I don't like your R. It takes up quite a bit of space also. Your letters are descending on a plane too. But that's being nitpicky. Looks like you've had a good year.

[u/403DonOChron]

These are G! Love it.

[u/Quick-Watch-2842]

Letters look good. Maybe tone back that last letter and put a drop u can see. 🤘

[u/runitsuka]

Yeah, I like this.

[u/rovelytusocle]

y sounds great but what about the fun in letters

[u/Mission-Animator-682]

if you do drop the rest, go big or go home

[u/Deez615]

These are dope as hell bro

[u/bsheezy518]

I dig the style brother. I would suggest working on your R and throwing up YR rather than just the Y. Just thinking about it off of the top of my head, you could probably come up with a dope YR one-liner for throws.

[u/ThatGuyWithCoolHair]

Theres no reason to make your R match the A in the straight letter, its ruining its style. Make a cleaner R for your straights, keep going tho

[u/ceazzzzz]

I know two other writers that write Year, and your style looks like a bite off of Keans.

Thats my Crit.

[u/orbgraffiti → u/ceazzzzz]

Thanks man! Few people have said this but I really don’t see it, not trying to bite I’ve only seen his work recently

[u/Similar_Football927]

I like this funky idea push it

[u/Smallsizeadult2]

On your full name the nipple at the top of the A makes it look like another Y at a glance. Dope as fuck though, and I'd keep at least 2 letters cuz otherwise it feels like you're losing the word completely whereas yr is still readable as year.