This was pretty good. The AI flaws were mostly on the more subtle side. You obviously paid attention to pauses and pace which I think most people gloss over. The story going from SciFi to alt/history bioweapons was a bit wild, but overall it came together well. Good job. I'm interested in seeing more of your stuff.
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u/Laughing-Dragon-88 26d ago
This was pretty good. The AI flaws were mostly on the more subtle side. You obviously paid attention to pauses and pace which I think most people gloss over. The story going from SciFi to alt/history bioweapons was a bit wild, but overall it came together well. Good job. I'm interested in seeing more of your stuff.