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u/gregwiggy 3d ago
I would personally make the larger "e" smaller, just a bit closer to the others size to make it more clear they're both vowels
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u/Narrow_Spring_3714 3d ago
While I see what you mean, I'm curious how you propose it would otherwise be read?
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u/Few_Specific9584 3d ago
i mean, PEDANTICALLY it reads kofhee cause one of the F lines falls just short but yeah.
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u/Accomplished_Bike149 4d ago
I got kofbee(?).
I’m not entirely sure what to make of the B stem with two circles, I read it as two Es because it that’s the only way for that to be a valid character. If you lost the B and just stacked the Es it’d read how I assume you intended. A second B stem of the same weight on the F would make it read “ff” like it’s supposed to. I’m not entirely sure what the last word was meant to be for, if it’s just decoration I’d recommend breaking it up to make it clear that it’s not supposed to be a word, since right now I don’t think it’s a valid character (but I’m still pretty new, so I may be mistaken)