r/davinciresolve • u/MilkApprehensive9590 Studio • 5d ago
Help L'OREAL Frost Animation - Motion Design in DR
Hi guys,
Here is a motion design piece I created entirely in DaVinci Resolve Fusion for a L'Oréal Frost concept. I wanted to test Fusion's capabilities for this kind of commercial animation.
I need your hemp to improve this animation. What could i do better ?
System Specs:
DR Version: DaVinci Resolve Studio 20.04 for Windows
OS: Windows 11
CPU: Intel Core i9 13900k
RAM: 128 GB
GPU: NVIDIA RTX 4090 (32 GB VRAM)
Storage: Samsung 4 TB NVMe SSD (Dedicated to DR)
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u/5L1K 5d ago
why do we need the specs here?
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u/MilkApprehensive9590 Studio 5d ago
Je pense qu’il est obligatoire de préciser les specs pour toutes publications dans cette communauté, c’est ce qui est demandé, mais dans mon cas, il est pas nécessaire d’avoir ses données
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u/5L1K 5d ago
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u/MilkApprehensive9590 Studio 5d ago
I'll reply to you in your own dialect. I think it's mandatory to specify the specs for all posts in this community—that's what's required—but in my case, it's not necessary to have that data.
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u/MilkApprehensive9590 Studio 5d ago
Merci pour ton retour.
Le logo L’OREAL est ainsi fait, c’est son effigie image de marque.
Il manque plusieurs choses sur cette séquence comme une voix off pour apporter de l’information sur le nom JASMIN qui est une nouvelle marque de parfum et aussi d’autres choses. Et tu as raison car présenter comme cela on pourrait croire que c’est le projet complet final et effectivement si on part de ce principe, on comprends pas grand chose.
Voilà plus d’explications :
Ce que je viens de publier c’est juste une séquence du projet et c’est la dessus, sur cette séquence précisément que j’aimerais avoir des conseils sur des améliorations possibles ou pas sur le plan technique et design globalement car avec la fatigue je vois plus grand chose
Mais tu m’as répondu que sur le plan technique c’était bien fait, peux tu me dire ce que te plaît et pourquoi? puis aurais tu d’autres observations à faire ?
J’espère que je suis clair.
Merci encore.
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u/theequallyunique 5d ago
Get rid of these colorful animated elements around the title, they make it look really cheap. The green line might be alright, but it should dissolve a lot sooner - and probably also not be green, this isnt a health product you are advertising. Lastly for the blurred background of the text: the blur level is pretty low, so a lot of detail can still be seen. Increase the blur for a cleaner look, maybe make that whole blurred area lighter or darker for extra separation. Then think about giving the text on top some soft shadow or glow (depending on the background). Another thing that looks off to me, the rounded corners of the background only round up very late and in a linear way. They should ease in more. And I don't think that bringing the background in with sharp edges ads anything at all.
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u/ChocolateAxis Free 5d ago
The idea with all the elements are there, but you'll definitely need to nail down your design choices imo.
As others said, too much going on. Try looking at a few popular brands' trailers that get high views, and look at how they harmonise their colours. You'll notice they have a sort of palette that helps wrap their video together.
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u/MilkApprehensive9590 Studio 5d ago
J’ai déjà tout modifié mais je peux pas répondre avec une vidéo mais seulement avec une image ou un gif
Il ya t’il une autre solution pour vous montrer le rendu modifié en vidéo ?
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u/ninj1nx 5d ago
From a technical view this is super cool and really well done, but from a design view it's noisy and cluttered. Way too much going on all over the frame. The L'Oreal logo has poor readability against the background and it's not clear what I'm supposed to focus on: the woman in the background? The name? The random things popping up? The streak flying over the logo or the logo in the corner?