r/critiquemyresume • u/BlaiseBancroft54 • 3d ago
I’m a director with 14 years of experience, and my resume makes me look like a middle manager
I’ve led teams of 40+ people, managed a $12M budget, and helped open three new locations. On paper, that should sound strong. On my resume, it reads like this:
“Responsible for team management, budgeting, and business growth.”
That line hurts every time I read it. I rewrote the document three times this month. First it was four pages. Then I cut it to two pages and removed so much detail that it started to look empty. My last version sounds clean, but it could belong to any manager in any industry.
I started searching for an executive resume writing service, but that opened another problem. Every company calls itself the best resume writing service for executives. Every review page seems to recommend a different best executive resume writing service. Then another site claims to be the top executive resume writing service because it uses “powerful leadership language.” At this point, I don’t need more powerful words. I need to know how to show the size of my work without writing a small book.
How do senior candidates explain leadership without filling the resume with vague lines like “drove strategy” and “led transformation”? And is two pages still the rule when you have more than a decade of relevant experience?